Kia ora! I am a Year 6 student in Room 5 at Ahipara School, in the Far North of New Zealand. My teacher is Ms Peters. This is where I share my learning. Please leave a positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.
Kia ora Tillie, I really enjoyed reading your truly captivating holiday recount about your trip to Rainbow's End and the way you used the five senses in your writing. Maybe next time you could work on spelling and punctuation. Blog ya later! Ms Peters.
Hello Tillie, I liked reading about your trip to Rainbows end, it was very cool. Maybe next time you could add your favourite ride. See you later! From Hannah.
Hi Tillie. My name is Wairua from Oturu School and I really liked your Holiday Recount. I really liked the way you described Rainbows end.I also liked your punctuation that you used in your recount.
KIa ora Tillie my name is MIkaire and I am a year 8 student attending Paihia School. I like you recount about Rainbows End because you added detail and I like your background that you chose. I have never been to Rainbows End before but I would like to go one day. Your post reminds me of when I was at my grandparents and we were doing a bow shooting contest and I lost but my brother won.
Kia ora Tillie,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your truly captivating holiday recount about your trip to Rainbow's End and the way you used the five senses in your writing. Maybe next time you could work on spelling and punctuation. Blog ya later! Ms Peters.
Hello Tillie, I liked reading about your trip to Rainbows end, it was very cool. Maybe next time you could add your favourite ride. See you later! From Hannah.
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ReplyDeleteHi Tillie.
ReplyDeleteMy name is Wairua from Oturu School and I really liked your Holiday Recount. I really liked the way you described Rainbows end.I also liked your punctuation that you used in your recount.
What was your favourite ride at Rainbows End.
KIa ora Tillie my name is MIkaire and I am a year 8 student attending Paihia School. I like you recount about Rainbows End because you added detail and I like your background that you chose. I have never been to Rainbows End before but I would like to go one day. Your post reminds me of when I was at my grandparents and we were doing a bow shooting contest and I lost but my brother won.
ReplyDeleteWhat was your favorite ride?