Kia ora! I am a Year 6 student in Room 5 at Ahipara School, in the Far North of New Zealand. My teacher is Ms Peters. This is where I share my learning. Please leave a positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.
Hi Tillie, this is Zana from the summer learning journey. Good job with your similes they are very creative and I like the fun background you have used. Next time you could try using people or things instead of She, like Tillie is as hungry as a bear or the lemon is as yellow as the sun. Keep up the good work! Ngā mihi nui, Zana Yates
Hi Tillie, this is Zana from the summer learning journey. Good job with your similes they are very creative and I like the fun background you have used. Next time you could try using people or things instead of She, like Tillie is as hungry as a bear or the lemon is as yellow as the sun. Keep up the good work!
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Zana Yates
Thank you for the comment next time I will try do cool stuff like that
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