Kia ora! I am a Year 6 student in Room 5 at Ahipara School, in the Far North of New Zealand. My teacher is Ms Peters. This is where I share my learning. Please leave a positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.
Hi Tilli my name is Breeze and I am a year 8 student at Paihia School. I enjoyed reading your blog post about your recount because our class Te Ngahere have also been doing writing but we have been writing narratives. I didn’t really understand what your recount was about and it was a bit hard to read it so maybe as a suggestion you could paste the writing on your blog so it is easier to read. I realized that all of the words colored in blue are all verbs. Did you know that? Keep up the good work. Ka kite!
Kia ora Tillie it’s Dale and I am a year 8 student at Paihia School. I really enjoyed your blog post about your recount because you added a photo so we know what you are talking about. I also liked your blog post because your recount was really interesting. I have also writing a recount and I really enjoy it. Do you enjoy doing recounts?
Hi Tillie my name is Mikaire and I am a year 8 student attending Paihia School. I like you post about your recount. Your post reminds me of when I saw two kingfishers flying next to each other while my dog was barking at them. I like how you made all the subtitles different colors.
Hi Tilli my name is Breeze and I am a year 8 student at Paihia School. I enjoyed reading your blog post about your recount because our class Te Ngahere have also been doing writing but we have been writing narratives. I didn’t really understand what your recount was about and it was a bit hard to read it so maybe as a suggestion you could paste the writing on your blog so it is easier to read. I realized that all of the words colored in blue are all verbs. Did you know that? Keep up the good work.
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Kia ora Tillie it’s Dale and I am a year 8 student at Paihia School. I really enjoyed your blog post about your recount because you added a photo so we know what you are talking about. I also liked your blog post because your recount was really interesting. I have also writing a recount and I really enjoy it.
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Hi Tillie my name is Mikaire and I am a year 8 student attending Paihia School. I like you post about your recount. Your post reminds me of when I saw two kingfishers flying next to each other while my dog was barking at them. I like how you made all the subtitles different colors.
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