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Hi Tillie my name is Mikaire and I am a year 8 student attending Paihia School. I like you blog post about Swiper and Dora because its funny and well written. I have written a story about a bounty hunter before but he hunted aliens instead. I also liked how you changed Dora from an actor to a bounty hunter it was a nice change to the story.
Have you written any other stories like this one before?
Hi Tillie my name is Mikaire and I am a year 8 student attending Paihia School. I like you blog post about Swiper and Dora because its funny and well written. I have written a story about a bounty hunter before but he hunted aliens instead. I also liked how you changed Dora from an actor to a bounty hunter it was a nice change to the story.
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